Hi Delijah your work looks so cool you did anamazing job.I like how you have added our Oonematopa and added lots of pictures.keep up the great job.
I agree Leilani, I think the onomatopoeia is awesome!
Hi Delijah I like how you put pow . I love popcorn its so yum and happy halloween .
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Hi delijah I really like it how you done.Some words into your powpow popcorn.It also sounds like you had fun.
hi Delijah I like your work it looks cool you did a anamazing job.I like how you added heaps of detail and I like you pictures and your big long beautiful writing.keep up your good work Delijah
HI Deliljah I really like your writing it has a lot of details .
Hi Delijah I really like how you told me about how pop corn changes. it looks like a very cool experiment and fun to make also it looks so so so yum to eat.