Sharisse Scanlan at Pt England School is teaching in a year 3 and 4 ILE called The Block
Hi Delijah your work looks so cool you did anamazing job.I like how you have added our Oonematopa and added lots of pictures.keep up the great job.
I agree Leilani, I think the onomatopoeia is awesome!
Hi Delijah I like how you put pow . I love popcorn its so yum and happy halloween .
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Hi delijah I really like it how you done.Some words into your powpow popcorn.It also sounds like you had fun.
hi Delijah I like your work it looks cool you did a anamazing job.I like how you added heaps of detail and I like you pictures and your big long beautiful writing.keep up your good work Delijah
HI Deliljah I really like your writing it has a lot of details .
Hi Delijah I really like how you told me about how pop corn changes. it looks like a very cool experiment and fun to make also it looks so so so yum to eat.